I like this idea but it needs some work. I like the thought of having the water running sound get louder with the more things he leaves on. But I think it needs to stay loud and not disappear at the end. Or you could have the water pressure be strong at first and then get softer and softer until there is nothing left as he keeps opening faucets. There still needs to be something at the end to tie either the loud sound or the no water left ideas together. In other words, what can you relate the loud sound too or what can he do at the end that he needs water for but now doesn't have any left? Think about that for your next draft.
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