Ok, you've done a nice job in sequencing the events out. I can easily see how this is going to play out. But I do have to ask you, do you really think that if he's that hot, he's going to forget that he has a water hose in his hand and not drink from that? Unless he goes in to get iced water. That I could see. Or he could get distracted with something happening in the house that he has to see, like his mom calling him or something. He could be day dreaming and then is snapped out of it by the sound of his mom. I think he needs something to distract him instead of him just forgetting to turn off the hose. Does that make sense? Let's talk in class tomorrow. 3 points out of 4
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