PSA Water Conservation Final

2/19/2016

Title: PSA Water Conservation
Topic: Saving Water
Issue: Hawaii residents take their water supply for granted.

Mr. M

3/31/2016 12:56:11 am

Water conservation is a great topic because water really is a valuable commodity and we need to do all we can to conserve it. We tend to take it for granted and we need to be reminded to do what we can to not let it go to waste. I like the shots you used and hearing the water running in the background was a nice touch. However your message isn't very strong. I guess I can believe that Brent doesn't close the outside faucet all the way as you show the hose trickling with water.....that can happen. But he let the sink faucet run a lot which made a very distinct sound in your video. I'm going to have to assume that his surprised look on his face is because he realized that he left the faucets running but it's not very clear that that's why he made that face. And nothing happens at the end to show us that he realized his mistake and fixed it. Your voiceover at the end also needs work. You sound very bland and not very convincing that we need to save water. There's no real emotion to your voice. 3.4 points

PSA Water Conservation Final

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